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Marius Surleac
[21.May.08 09:30]
Can you explain me “adamising” and also maybe you wanted to say “clear” instead of “clair”.

+ Definition of clair obscure from The Free Dictionary:
John Willy Kopperud
[21.May.08 23:46]

(Italian; “light-dark”)

Contrasting effects of light and shade in a work of art. Leonardo da Vinci brought the technique to its full potential, but it is usually associated with such 17th-century artists as Caravaggio and Rembrandt, who used it to outstanding effect. The chiaroscuro woodcut, produced by printing different tones of a colour from separate woodblocks on a single sheet of paper, was first produced in 16th-century Italy.

Adamizing? From the context here I gather that this is
linguistic innovation - describing an active process of shaping phenomena in the image of Adam. A most interesting
poem with rich and deep thoughts and images.
Cheers from Willy

 =  now it's getting clearer...
Marius Surleac
[21.May.08 23:55]
Thanks Willy for clearing my thoughts; I thought though "adamising" should be related with Adam. What I see here is quite a ceremony of the opposites mixing the two-shape reflexion of human behaviour under the mood of a religion belief.

Cheers from Marius!

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dan marius
[22.May.08 10:23]
well I kurtcobainized this poem and redhotchillipepperized its content to the extent of freudinization and thus it's proper to say that I feel like charlesmansonizing myself after reding it.

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dan marius
[22.May.08 10:27]
*reading instead of reding

"quite a ceremony of the opposites mixing the two-shape reflexion of human behaviour under the mood of a religion belief." quite? behavior.
dude what are you on ?

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Marius Surleac
[22.May.08 12:35]
I am straight and say what I see. What about your point of view?

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dan marius
[22.May.08 12:55]
glad you're straight. (I think you meant clean) I have no point of view whatsoever. you say what you see. by seeing I think you mean decoding the text. reaching its message & meaning. sometimes one can get lost along the way.

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Marius Surleac
[22.May.08 13:29]
Indeed decoding the text. You're right that sometimes one can get lost along the way, but the most intriguing and good part is the fact that some of the texts can create different opinions. Only the writer can clear us all.

Cheers Dan and have a nice day!

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ion a
[23.May.08 07:35]
i love youth
for it might carry my DNA forward

baby birth life time things

adam = light
eve = shadow
(but she has a net) = confusion

splendorous chiarobscurisation

a wolf and a lamb
waiting for me
at the border customs

bribe in hand

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