| = !!! | Marius Surleac [21.May.08 20:42] |
| See that the questions should be marked with "?". I think that the text should be polished in a more poetic shape; what I see is more "personals" than "poetry". | |
| = feeling it. | Christopher Thripp [23.May.08 01:56] |
| i think it's great just a tweak here and there great words and will be a great poem...feeling it regina more please. | |