| = great dan.|
|wicked dan ...loved it ...you surely have a way with your feelings and words ...really like to read your work.|
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|I must say positive comments make me feel odd :) because now I have to say thank you and all that. But seriously, thank you. Glad you liked it (and all that) :)|
|+ strong poem...|
|I see it harsher Chris. I like Dan's mood, to bring a different damaging shape and a cutting style to the projections of the text through our eyes (readers), the words have weight ("heads falling like feathers " / "humanity multiplied by 0" - quite brilliant idea), power ("every broken bone in this world comes into direct contact |
with Jesus") and creates a strong imagery.
I like this tough style of yours Dan and for long time I wanted to give you a star, and now this text deserves it completely. Interesting opinion though, about the end of time
Cheers from Marius!
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|yeaap/ bright yellow stars make Jack happy ! thanks|
Edilberto González Trejos
|"every broken bone in this world comes into direct contact |
the 21st century will be/ either nuclear or
the oceans will Eat you"
Anacalyptical lines of lucidity and vision!
Really like it