| = Too many mistakes | Lisnic Anna [07.Aug.08 03:19] |
| You should pay greater attention to grammar. There are too many mistakes in your poem. A text cannot impress, nor even attract, if the reader gets disturbed by poor grammar. | |
| = Anna Lisnic | Luminita Suse [07.Aug.08 03:21] |
| Anna, would you be so kind and pinpoint some grammar issues that you have noticed in this text? Thank you. | |
| = Just some of your mistakes | Lisnic Anna [21.Sep.08 12:25] |
| "And even if I will cry along my road life" - There's no "if" after "will" "in my knees" - the correct preposition is "on" "Love for the people" - you don't need an article here "Protect me, My Lord, of temptation " - one protects "from" and not "of" "it is everything holy" - it is just incorrect. It is a mot-a-mot translation from Romanian | |