| = no clue about... | Marius Surleac [22.Jun.08 16:00] |
| The poem is interesting! Should be an imprison creature? Though, one small observation: “their courage” instead of “thier” – a tipping mistake Cheers from Marius! | |
| = . | Vicleanu Mihaita [21.Jun.08 11:53] |
| thanks for pointing out...the idea is simple...personalization ...an image beyond reality..thank you for reading. cheers | |
| = good | Daniela Voicu [22.Jun.08 17:19] |
| ,,I would cut their heads off" me to lol , good ideea! | |
| = Haunting images of captivity... | John Willy Kopperud [22.Jun.08 16:00] |
| ...form BARBED WIRES to BUILD MY CAGE. Fine verses! Cheers from Willy | |
| = . | Vicleanu Mihaita [22.Jun.08 17:42] |
| thank you Willy | |
| = . | Vicleanu Mihaita [22.Jun.08 17:44] |
| go cut their heads off, daniela ;)) thanks for reading | |