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Marius Surleac
[22.Jun.08 16:00]
The poem is interesting! Should be an imprison creature?
Though, one small observation: “their courage” instead of “thier” – a tipping mistake

Cheers from Marius!

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Vicleanu Mihaita
[21.Jun.08 11:53]
thanks for pointing out...the idea is simple...personalization image beyond reality..thank you for reading.

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Daniela Voicu
[22.Jun.08 17:19]
,,I would cut their heads off" me to lol , good ideea!

 =  Haunting images of captivity...
John Willy Kopperud
[22.Jun.08 16:00]
...form BARBED WIRES to BUILD MY CAGE. Fine verses!
Cheers from Willy

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Vicleanu Mihaita
[22.Jun.08 17:42]
thank you Willy

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Vicleanu Mihaita
[22.Jun.08 17:44]
go cut their heads off, daniela ;)) thanks for reading

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