= well done! | Marius Surleac [28.Jun.08 19:25] |
Well done Mihai. I feel surrealism invading your poem, you know how to "chew" the words and swallow the readers' breath. I found the second stanza the most wonderful within the poem! Great job! | |
+ Splendid images... | John Willy Kopperud [28.Jun.08 19:55] |
...in this mystifying narration. It leaves me with the wish to pass between Scylla and Charybdis, shaped as huge ice cubicles in the gigantic longdrink of life. Cheers from Willy | |
= good | Daniela Voicu [29.Jun.08 07:38] |
Wonderful poem!The dream help us to know the surrealism . Very deep poem , senses, u are not a dream , that it's the fight with your soul , identity . My opinion . I like the poem very much. | |
= . | Vicleanu Mihaita [29.Jun.08 02:24] |
thank you both for such nice words! my best regards to both of you. | |
= . | Vicleanu Mihaita [29.Jun.08 10:47] |
thank you daniela. kind regards. | |
= great. | Christopher Thripp [29.Jun.08 23:05] |
great work mihai the language and feelings shiver the soul. | |
= . | Vicleanu Mihaita [29.Jun.08 23:18] |
thank you Chris. kind regads. | |