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Christopher Thripp
[01.Jul.08 05:17]
marius your poem shines in the moon ...
great thrust and excellent words
congratulations on this one.

 =  my kind regards Chris!
Marius Surleac
[01.Jul.08 08:53]
Hi Chris!

I thank you very much for the twinkle and I am glad you liked it. I am glad that you saw the thrust effect beyond words.

Thank you once again my friend!

Best regards,

 =  beautiful
Vicleanu Mihaita
[01.Jul.08 09:01]
anger that releases a monster. well chosen words to express a feeling. powerful poem.
kind regards, Mihai

 =  thank you very much Mihai!
Marius Surleac
[01.Jul.08 09:06]
You're right Mihai!
The anger monster that waits for the perfect moment to come out from the darkness of our beings, in a "blurred roar".

Thank you very much and you're always welcome.

Best wishes,

 =  so blady...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[06.Jul.08 19:26]
brrrrrrrrrrr, scary even if beautiful...

 =  thank you and welcome back!
Marius Surleac
[06.Jul.08 20:21]
Hmmmm ... blady! Maybe yes.

Welcome back Romulus. Thank you very much for the kind comment. I'm glad you liked it.

Best regards,

 =  Great :)
ioana dintica
[27.Dec.08 19:03]
I see the anger in the eyes, the blood that gives color to that cold stare, I feel the anger in the bites and in the lack of pain given by fury, the soul gives birth to “all” the anger, disappearing timid in barely heard roars.
Kind regards, Ioana.

PS: don’t let that anger get me, I’m rather attached to my skin :P:)

 =  A gothic tale...
John Willy Kopperud
[27.Dec.08 19:17] free modern form. I really do enjoy it when you go for
fusions, Marius! Accomplished and indeed thrilling.
Cheers from Willy

 =  thank you Ioana, Willy!
Marius Surleac
[27.Dec.08 19:42]
Ioana, you've seen well that anger. Glad you liked it and thank you very much for your kind comment.

Willy, dark gothic atmosphere though. Glad you liked and hope it isn't so thrilling. :)

Thank you both!

Best regards,

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