|marius your poem shines in the moon ...|
great thrust and excellent words
congratulations on this one.
| = my kind regards Chris!|
I thank you very much for the twinkle and I am glad you liked it. I am glad that you saw the thrust effect beyond words.
Thank you once again my friend!
| = beautiful|
|anger that releases a monster. well chosen words to express a feeling. powerful poem. |
kind regards, Mihai
| = thank you very much Mihai!|
|You're right Mihai! |
The anger monster that waits for the perfect moment to come out from the darkness of our beings, in a "blurred roar".
Thank you very much and you're always welcome.
| = so blady...|
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
|brrrrrrrrrrr, scary even if beautiful...|
| = thank you and welcome back!|
|Hmmmm ... blady! Maybe yes.|
Welcome back Romulus. Thank you very much for the kind comment. I'm glad you liked it.
| = Great :)|
|I see the anger in the eyes, the blood that gives color to that cold stare, I feel the anger in the bites and in the lack of pain given by fury, the soul gives birth to “all” the anger, disappearing timid in barely heard roars. |
Kind regards, Ioana.
PS: don’t let that anger get me, I’m rather attached to my skin :P:)
| = A gothic tale...|
John Willy Kopperud
|...in free modern form. I really do enjoy it when you go for|
fusions, Marius! Accomplished and indeed thrilling.
Cheers from Willy
| = thank you Ioana, Willy!|
|Ioana, you've seen well that anger. Glad you liked it and thank you very much for your kind comment.|
Willy, dark gothic atmosphere though. Glad you liked and hope it isn't so thrilling. :)
Thank you both!