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 =  my opinion!
Marius Surleac
[24.Jul.08 10:14]
Romantics, hearts aches, distance between two persons amplifies the feelings. Nice!

cheers from Marius!

 =  yes
dan marius
[24.Jul.08 11:38]
without me"

yes yes. great part. elliptical and filled with

 =  ships
Rodica Vasilescu
[09.Oct.12 17:25]
avril lavigne would do a nice song after this one.

 =  song
Christopher Thripp
[27.Jul.08 14:15]
yes i agree great song it would be...

 =  Song it will be
Claudia Sandoi
[28.Jul.08 11:23]
Thank you so much for all your feed-back on my poems. Since everyone concluded this would be a nice song I gave it to a friend of mine who is a composer so we will soon see the result. You will be among the first to hear it, until it will hit the radios, promiss. ;))

+ Brings to mind some words...
John Willy Kopperud
[28.Jul.08 11:19]
...from Leonard Cohen. The song is called "Leaving Greensleaves" :
- Ain't it fine, ain't it wild
to finally end our exercise.
This is a finely put poem with an epic touch to it, Claudia!
Cheers from Willy

 =  beautiful poem with an aftertaste...
Corina Gina Papouis
[28.Jul.08 18:22]
Beautiful poem, stays with you, the reader, for a while, like an aftertaste. It could be a song but I would rather read it again and again...
P.S. If you decide is going to be a song I would choose Dido over Avril Lavigne..(no offense to Claudiu)

 =  The song to be
Cleo Sandoi
[31.Jul.08 22:41]
Corina, I would too choose Dido over Avril(sorry Claudiu) but even better, my friend Stef from NightFly will make a song out of it and I can hardly wait for the result.

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