| = my opinion!|
|Romantics, hearts aches, distance between two persons amplifies the feelings. Nice!|
cheers from Marius!
| = yes|
yes yes. great part. elliptical and filled with
| = ships|
|avril lavigne would do a nice song after this one.|
| = song|
|yes i agree great song it would be...|
| = Song it will be|
|Thank you so much for all your feed-back on my poems. Since everyone concluded this would be a nice song I gave it to a friend of mine who is a composer so we will soon see the result. You will be among the first to hear it, until it will hit the radios, promiss. ;))|
|+ Brings to mind some words...|
John Willy Kopperud
|...from Leonard Cohen. The song is called "Leaving Greensleaves" :|
- Ain't it fine, ain't it wild
to finally end our exercise.
This is a finely put poem with an epic touch to it, Claudia!
Cheers from Willy
| = beautiful poem with an aftertaste...|
Corina Gina Papouis
Beautiful poem, stays with you, the reader, for a while, like an aftertaste. It could be a song but I would rather read it again and again...
P.S. If you decide is going to be a song I would choose Dido over Avril Lavigne..(no offense to Claudiu)
| = The song to be|
|Corina, I would too choose Dido over Avril(sorry Claudiu) but even better, my friend Stef from NightFly will make a song out of it and I can hardly wait for the result.|