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John Willy Kopperud
[27.Jul.08 21:26]
bury in past tense is BURIED
still I think... you
ANYMORE is to be placed after I love
take one step at a time...all doesn't belong there
Avoid unnecessary repetitions.
Good luck from Willy

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