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 =  Horror, is it...
John Willy Kopperud
[28.Jul.08 11:09]
...the outline of the succubus in the background that I see?
Not bad, but I wonder :
MY NAILS SHRIEKING YOUR EYES LIKE A BLACK CAT
shouldn't that rather be;
STRIKING YOUR EYES?
Anyway that would make much more sense to me.
Cheers from Willy

 =  i change
Daniela Voicu
[28.Jul.08 13:17]
thank you , yes i change

 =  Daniela
Corina Gina Papouis
[28.Jul.08 18:20]
Daniela,
Your beast is quite scarry..lots of anger and a sense of voodoo, too:). I wouldn't like to be the one walking by your poet/ propriety. Interesting work.
Regards,

 =  property.
Christopher Thripp
[29.Jul.08 02:59]
i think thats meant to be property.?
if i know her writings well enough!!

 =  interesting
Lynn West
[29.Jul.08 08:40]
Very deep, Dani. Venting anger can be good as long as it doesn't become all consuming.

 =  thank you
Daniela Voicu
[31.Jul.08 22:42]
Thank you Lynn

 =  A wee bit more to be done
John Willy Kopperud
[30.Jul.08 21:09]
Necessary corrections:
12.line: ALL OF your body
13.line: a lot OF food ...
Good luck!
Cheers from Willy




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