| = one small... | Marius Surleac [02.Aug.08 16:56] |
| I think that in the third line should be "silence with more than a scream" instead of "that a scream". Anyway, the poem is nice. Cheers! | |
| = Right, as always | Cleo Sandoi [05.Aug.08 11:20] |
| ...how come every time I try not to be careless you are there to spot the only thing I did not notice? Thanks for the feed-back. Most welcomed and appreciated. | |