| = my opinion! | Marius Surleac [05.Aug.08 22:10] |
| I think that if you'll polish it a little - no spaces before "?", the number of questions, the first stanza a bit - then will look better and maybe won't be part from the workshop! | |
| = Yes..but... | Corina Gina Papouis [07.Aug.08 03:35] |
| yes, marius was right there (spaces before question marks and all..), but i liked the style, the tone, the message..plesae give it that polish..to quote you: "you should hope and not loose".. on this one.. Best wishes, Corina | |
| = I like | Daniela Voicu [08.Aug.08 15:28] |
| Hi Paul-Florin, I like your words!First part more. Daniela Voicu | |
| = Thank you | Gardescu Paul Florin [30.Mar.13 12:37] |
| Hey guys! Thank you for your input. I tried to polish it a bit, at least its appearance. Let me know what you think on the new published stuff. | |