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 =  yeap - true panic button
Marius Surleac
[09.Aug.08 23:12]
Hi Willy!

The idea doesn't represent quite a haiku but is brilliant and very reflective, very visual as well.

My question: Peter Schilling - Major Tom or David Bowie - Space Oddity? I must say that I like more Bowie’s version.

Well done my friend!

Best wishes,

 =  indeed!
Marius Surleac
[09.Aug.08 23:34]
You're right about touch and go haiku.
Good job!


 =  Bowie
Mike Aspros
[10.Aug.08 06:51]
was the image that flashed for me..wonderful poem with a blow in the end. ncie work Willy. best,

 =  "We know major Tom's a junkie"...
John Willy Kopperud
[10.Aug.08 11:24] the line from "Ashes to ashes" that helped kick this off, Mike. I observe the great iconic impact this character from pop culture has had upon my writing and in a way the poem is a tribute to Bowie. Thanks a lot for your generous response, Mike!
Cheers from Willy

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Laurenţiu Ion
[04.Feb.09 22:45]
very descriptive this poetical engraving, even if it doesn't respect the norms of a haiku.
good writing!

 =  Thanks a lot for your apprecation, Laurentiu!
John Willy Kopperud
[07.Feb.09 19:54]
Isn't it puzzling that Major Tom is the pivoting point of this haiku-normbreaking poem, considering that Bowie has been
such an eager student of Japanese theater?
Cheers from Willy

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