= yeap - true panic button | Marius Surleac [09.Aug.08 23:12] |
Hi Willy! The idea doesn't represent quite a haiku but is brilliant and very reflective, very visual as well. My question: Peter Schilling - Major Tom or David Bowie - Space Oddity? I must say that I like more Bowie’s version. Well done my friend! Best wishes, Marius | |
= indeed! | Marius Surleac [09.Aug.08 23:34] |
You're right about touch and go haiku. Good job! Cheers, Marius | |
= Bowie | Mike Aspros [10.Aug.08 06:51] |
was the image that flashed for me..wonderful poem with a blow in the end. ncie work Willy. best, | |
= "We know major Tom's a junkie"... | John Willy Kopperud [10.Aug.08 11:24] |
...is the line from "Ashes to ashes" that helped kick this off, Mike. I observe the great iconic impact this character from pop culture has had upon my writing and in a way the poem is a tribute to Bowie. Thanks a lot for your generous response, Mike! Cheers from Willy | |
= . | Laurenţiu Ion [04.Feb.09 22:45] |
very descriptive this poetical engraving, even if it doesn't respect the norms of a haiku. good writing! | |
= Thanks a lot for your apprecation, Laurentiu! | John Willy Kopperud [07.Feb.09 19:54] |
Isn't it puzzling that Major Tom is the pivoting point of this haiku-normbreaking poem, considering that Bowie has been such an eager student of Japanese theater? Cheers from Willy | |