| = GIVE away... | John Willy Kopperud [16.Aug.08 16:51] |
| ...of course, if anyone should wonder what FIVE away means! Willy | |
| = to willy | Lee Ann Hardt [17.Aug.08 18:34] |
| I somewhat fear that I've tried a bit too hard to stick to the letter format and thus lost the poetry feel. I guess simpler would've been better. Thanks again for your encouragement. | |
| = The letter format works for me as a reader... | John Willy Kopperud [18.Aug.08 21:02] |
| ...Lee Ann. I sense the perfectionism in your attitude, but there is some very good imagery to be found in this letter to one or a number of fictional characters. Your second stanza really takes flight with the use of the images cheekbone, neckline and rails of the tube. In short; this poem didn't let me down! Cheers from Willy | |