| = Sea, sunrise, heaven... | John Willy Kopperud [16.Aug.08 17:13] |
| ...and utter loneliness in this fine tale. Very well put! Cheers from Willy | |
| = listen the nature | Marius Surleac [16.Aug.08 21:50] |
| Well done Claudia! The meditation status is well imposed, the feelings as well. With each poem, your style becomes better. Good job as always, Marius | |
| = last | felix nicolau [02.Sep.08 16:45] |
| i didn't like the end.it exaggeratingly softens the content | |