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 =  nice
felix nicolau
[17.Sep.08 19:11]
i could read tracks in a double way, investing music in this haiku.

 =  That's right, Felix!
John Willy Kopperud
[17.Sep.08 20:17]
The Snails are really something. What a band! I must remark too that the opening line introduces some kind of mysterious
mood - the morning mist.
Cheers from Willy

 =  Thank you Felix, Willy
Marius Surleac
[17.Sep.08 21:07]
Felix, glad you've perceived the second meaning of the "tracks"!

Willy, glad you've found that "the snails" is a band, not too well known by the people.

"the morning mist" - can be seen as the exhaustion after a concert, as well! :)

Best wishes and thank you very much for understanding my text, and I'm glad you like it!

Cheers,
Marius




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