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= kind of deflated
ion a
[15.Sep.08 07:26]
it starts promising but kind of fizzles out.

"beyond our words/ lies solitude" => fine, kind of a haiku setup, even if a little pretentious

"pale bride of moonlit nights/ sunk in the bitter promise/ of earth's cold embrace" => hmmm, all too predictable, sort of 19th century teenage angst, etc.

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= kind of deflated	ion a [15.Sep.08 07:26]
it starts promising but kind of fizzles out. "beyond our words/ lies solitude" => fine, kind of a haiku setup, even if a little pretentious "pale bride of moonlit nights/ sunk in the bitter promise/ of earth's cold embrace" => hmmm, all too predictable, sort of 19th century teenage angst, etc.