| = wearing out discourse|
|the beginning is quite lame. People see the title, the theme creates a configuration in our brains. The fist line should have expressed this sensation of yours in other words. Desperation laddles out thousands of ways to express it!|
it reminds me of one of the most delicious retorts I have heard in a movie about Shakespeare's life and work- there was the Queen's spokesman (or announcer) shouting out in front of the croud: the Queen, the Queen, here comes the Queen.
and her ladyship's whipping words in the silence around: "Shut up, you're wearing out my name!"
And there are mistakes: [since 3 days i'm sleepless] - change it into: [i've been sleepless for 3 days], for God's sake!