| = Beautiful imagery | Mike Aspros [29.Sep.08 06:45] |
| and narrative, well done! -best, mike | |
| = thanks Mike | Marius Surleac [29.Sep.08 10:22] |
| Mike, thank you very much - I appreciate your kind comment and glad you liked it. Marius | |
| = a verse | Simona Sumanaru [11.Oct.08 02:00] |
| to be noted, "the cruel wind tasting my skin". | |
| = gracias! | Marius Surleac [12.Oct.08 22:34] |
| Simona thank you again and glad you liked it. Best wishes, Marius | |
| = Those darned birds! | John Willy Kopperud [12.Oct.08 22:54] |
| The ill omens of the crow and the raven! Enjoyed it, Marius! | |
| = thank you Willy! | Marius Surleac [13.Oct.08 14:01] |
| Willy, thank you for the lecture sign! Actually these birds can be seen as bad omens but also good - here I used both for the stylistic image with two opposites meanings, the raven being the most intelligent from the birds and the response of the crow metamorphosed into raven. All these are like in a dream with memories, ideas, beliefs described in a surrealist stance, mood. Glad you like it. Best wishes my friend! Marius | |
| = smiles | Yoanna D [30.Dec.08 11:00] |
| I love it :) it`s like an almost frozen tree, an untamed statue that comes to life, discovering the world`s colors and tastes, even the dangerous ones and it is still playful, it has self awareness and emotional perspective, i just love it. cheers and smiles, Ioana. | |
| = thank you Ioana! | Marius Surleac [30.Dec.08 11:14] |
| Ioana, glad you liked it and glad about your opinion as well. This poem reflect a sort of tiredness as is to be found within its shape, sustained by some frames logically built. Cheers, Marius | |