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 =  Marius
Corina Gina Papouis
[29.Sep.08 16:01]
a sense of Goth came over me reading this...repulsive as Death may be, though pulling you in with Its perfume.
Brilliant!

 =  Corina
Marius Surleac
[29.Sep.08 16:24]
Corina, thank you very much for your beautiful comment!
I am glad that you thought about as for "Goth" - which is something apart. Here is about the corpse-flower plant and I like as well the aesthetic of ugliness.

You're always welcome and delighted about your opinion!

Regards,
Marius

+ A plant for sure, Marius, but also...
John Willy Kopperud
[29.Sep.08 18:13]
...an uncanny atmosphere here, with the flies and all. Most understandable that Corina associated it with "Goth." Since
there is an unexpected twist to the aesthetics here, I regard this as one of your better Haikus! Hence a yellow one.
Cheers from Willy

 =  Willy and Marius
Corina Gina Papouis
[29.Sep.08 18:40]
I guess I come from that generation..when death smelled sweet..:)the text was a nice reminder! thanks again Marius!:)
Regards to you both!

 =  Thank you Willy, Corina!
Marius Surleac
[29.Sep.08 19:54]
Willy, best regards and thanks for your kindness and the yellow sign. I appreciate your feedback and glad you felt it that way. Also thank you for the perseverance you showed on my texts. Regards my friend!

Corina, I bet you do! So beautiful times! Cheers, Marius!

 =  Interesting
Andrada Ianosi
[02.Oct.08 19:49]
It's a non-motionless picture of death and wonderful synesthesia here.

Great job, Marius !


Cheers,
Andrada

 =  er:
Andrada Ianosi
[02.Oct.08 19:50]
..and a wonderful"

 =  thank you Andrada!
Marius Surleac
[02.Oct.08 20:42]
Andrada, thank you very much for your words and you've pointed out nicely the correspondence. Though the notion of death is not really death, but can be seen like that after all finishes.

Best wishes,
Marius




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