| = There you go again...|
John Willy Kopperud
|...with another good poem! A biting comment to the cryout for|
"family values". To certain conservatives it may seem paradoxical, but a lot of us live in stable relationships and
with a sound personal moral standard without ever uttering that slogan!
Cheers from Willy
| = .|
|this one sounds better. although the tone remains the same.|
| = So what do you mean?|
Edgar A. Baguio
|Dan Marius, what do you mean by a "tone" in poetry? Maybe you mean the unity of my theme? Of course there should only be one theme in a poem, I mean a formal one. Not like a work of a scattered brain. And why would this comment not be allowed? |
Are you all dictators here? You just love to post what you like and delete what you don't like?
| = "leave the kids alone"|
|"Of course there should only be one theme in a poem, I mean a formal one." It takes a scatterbrain to write decent poetry. But then again... you're a teacher. How could you know that?|