| = There you go again... | John Willy Kopperud [29.Sep.08 19:18] |
| ...with another good poem! A biting comment to the cryout for "family values". To certain conservatives it may seem paradoxical, but a lot of us live in stable relationships and with a sound personal moral standard without ever uttering that slogan! Cheers from Willy | |
| = . | dan marius [03.Oct.08 17:57] |
| this one sounds better. although the tone remains the same. | |
| = So what do you mean? | Edgar A. Baguio [05.Oct.08 16:55] |
| Dan Marius, what do you mean by a "tone" in poetry? Maybe you mean the unity of my theme? Of course there should only be one theme in a poem, I mean a formal one. Not like a work of a scattered brain. And why would this comment not be allowed? Are you all dictators here? You just love to post what you like and delete what you don't like? | |
| = "leave the kids alone" | dan marius [06.Oct.08 11:29] |
| "Of course there should only be one theme in a poem, I mean a formal one." It takes a scatterbrain to write decent poetry. But then again... you're a teacher. How could you know that? | |