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 =  all the best in the world!!!
Marius Surleac
[04.Oct.08 14:54]
Sweet, elegant, serene, beautiful, wise, very descriptive and colourful – the main characteristics of this poem!

Well done Willy!

Best wishes,

 =  Some poems seem...
John Willy Kopperud
[04.Oct.08 15:31] be rooted and stored in one's own life, such as this one. It just waited for that accidental meeting to be released. Thank you so much for that most generous comment,
Cheers from Willy

 =  Beautiful
Mike Aspros
[05.Oct.08 05:45]
agreeing on all point shared by Marius; I was there on the bus with you, excellent job in deploying the senses to put me there. This was a pleasure to read. best, Mike

 =  willy.
Christopher Thripp
[05.Oct.08 06:28]
there is nothing like an ol boom boom to keep your memories alive...
great job willy..

 =  A toast...
John Willy Kopperud
[05.Oct.08 12:45] the women of this world, who only need to be themselves!
Thanks a lot for your comments, Mike and Chris.
I leave you with a slight rewriting of the cartoonist Gilbert
Love can get you through times with no money
better than money can get you through times with no love.
Cheers from Willy

 =  Willy
Corina Gina Papouis
[05.Oct.08 16:54]
There’s nothing like a poem released from your chest, just like a tickly cough that has to come out! I bet that bus trip will stay with you until...forever.
Wonderful text!

 =  Thank you Corina!
John Willy Kopperud
[05.Oct.08 17:16]
Both for that perceptive comment and for the fact that also a woman has responded to the poem. Without this response I would have felt slightly embarrassed, if you get my drift!
Cheers from Willy

 =  Willy!
Corina Gina Papouis
[05.Oct.08 17:29]
Even women have their own bus worry about.:) I guess love comes to you in so many shapes and flavours that, as a poet it is (almost) a duty to write about. Honesty comes out so well in a verse. Don't you think?:))
Just don't hold back..

 =  You're so right
John Willy Kopperud
[05.Oct.08 18:30]
The poet is but a medium giving shape to the words, thoughts
and sensual experiences of love. Don't worry,Corina, I won't hold
Cheers from Willy

 =  To each love its poem
Simona Sumanaru
[11.Oct.08 16:37]
We never know when (a past) love may find us in the rain and give us a ride, ain't it Willy? Best be prepared with an honoring poem, such as yours.

 =  The bus is...
John Willy Kopperud
[11.Oct.08 17:58]
..a poet's vehicle, Simona, a carriage laden with possibilities! Thank you very much for your comment.
Cheers from Willy

 =  transporting love
Simona Sumanaru
[12.Oct.08 18:51]
is such a sweet burden. I thank you for allowing us to relive all those times we've been in love in a gentle, sensual manner.

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