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+ I see you rhyme as good...
John Willy Kopperud
[27.Oct.08 10:27]
...as you master free prose. Let me twitch Mick Jagger's words a little: It's only poetry, but I like it!
Cheers from Willy

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Marius Surleac
[28.Oct.08 10:53]
I like the rhythm here build by sounds. Interesting approach. Though, "Elliott" from the title is a writer, or you wanted to say "Eliot" the famous T.S.Eliot?

Nice!

Best wishes,
Marius

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Daniel Taylor
[30.Oct.08 11:38]
not T.S. Eliot, it's Elliott Smith, the musician!




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