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 =  just another way
Corina Gina Papouis
[08.Nov.08 11:46]
my eyes become the lighting
the talking done by your breathing
my scent your guide
fingers doing a silent walk

our hands discussing the night
holding us in magic
your soul asks mine to dance
my smile caresses tenderly yours


our feelings have no doubt
everybody else cast away
your questions bring you closer
Let forever be the answer


Hope you don't mind:)
Corina

 =  diffrent perspectives
stanca potra
[10.Nov.08 19:35]
I don't mind at all. Thanks for the input and for the time dedicated to my poem. I like your version as well, it's just another way to look at the same thing.
Best to you,
Stanca




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