| = Chris | Corina Gina Papouis [22.Nov.08 22:00] |
| Russian love, 3 seconds left to live, sadness and lots of love questions...Wow, Chris, what is going on? A very sensitive poem, coming from a hurt heart... Hope the author gets better:) Cheers, Corina | |
| = errrr | Corina Gina Papouis [22.Nov.08 23:04] |
| Diana, ever so sorry to have mistaken your name...Appologies... | |
| = no worries, Corina | Diana Todea [23.Nov.08 18:47] |
| No problem. I just realized that writing is the best way for therapy, ergo my poem about a broken heart, which is true. Poems should reflect reality, in order to reach the public. Thanks, Cheers, Diana. | |
| = Snow drowning inside the mouth | Ada Ionescu [25.Nov.08 10:38] |
| ... and the poem did reached to me. :) I took an interest especially in the expresive methaphors: "snow drowning inside the mouth", "the narrow place dissolved my feelings", "what is love when sadness is big enough to fill blue eyes?/ where all the love goes when nobody is near to hold you?"... and the rest up to the end. Actually... I think the whole poem is an extended methaphor made of tiny, precious pieces. Regards. | |