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Gabriel Ghimpu
[26.Nov.08 21:10]
I realy need to know what is wrong in this poem. Thanks!

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Marius Surleac
[26.Nov.08 21:14]
I will give you an answer since I saw your question: I think you shall improve your syntax of the text because it needs a big improvement.




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