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+ Answer to your question!
Corina Gina Papouis
[02.Dec.08 17:43]
I guess this one stands out from the crowd!

Sweet and short with a great level of depth, I loved its rhetorical feel as well as its sarcastic/ self-ironic tone...and because every question deserves an answer, (yes or no in this case), well,...I shall let you ponder…:)

Great job, Willy!


 =  there are two answers: yes or yes!
Marius Surleac
[02.Dec.08 19:52]
Corina's right. I can sense the sarcasm and some arrows directed towards some ideas hereabout. Smart view as well as, well pointed, the first stanza.


 =  Willy, old elephant...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[02.Dec.08 20:03]
Old friend,

Have you ever pondered how would have been to feel the first frost through the after/flood's first winter?

Would you have called it, "ice age"?

I hope you don't think fur means fit for cold, otherwise good grief to all camels...

Oh, and I hope ya don't think elephants are devolved mammoths???


 =  A question of form...
John Willy Kopperud
[02.Dec.08 21:26] may say, Corina. I have watched the dispute about the theory of evolution getting ever more stagnant on these pages. That is why I chose to use poetry as a tool to express paradoxes, puzzlement and wonder. Anyway, poetry gets me more excited than the doctrines do. Thank you very much for that star and your most generous comment - and that
star, of course!
Cheers from Willy

 =  Marius!
John Willy Kopperud
[02.Dec.08 21:28]
Thanks a lot from this hairy old creature!
Cheers from Willy

 =  Romulus, don't you think...
John Willy Kopperud
[02.Dec.08 21:39]
...considering the growth of facial hair that we both are rather more similar to the mammoths? As to the matter of dispute, let me just say that I fully agree to disagree with
you. My views are already stated. This time around I was first and foremost preoccupied with the shape of my thoughts, since the story often fascinates me a lot more than the mere views. By this remark I don't mean to disown
my responsibility for the statements of that dead beast enclosed in ice!
Cheers from your friend and fellow Christian

+ that's a keeper
ion a
[06.Dec.08 09:17]
lol, that's something new, it never occurred to me to ask: how come god allows so many species to disappear, like, a couple of thousand every year... looks like pretty soon we'll be alone around here, except for Willy's memories :)

 =  I certainly appreciate...
John Willy Kopperud
[06.Dec.08 15:19]
...your evaluation, that second star and your comment, ion!
Cheers from Willy

 =  :D
felix nicolau
[07.Dec.08 00:13]
not to joke with this, willy, they could fit you into some hibrid branches

 =  Sounds heavy, Felix...
John Willy Kopperud
[07.Dec.08 09:42]
...and Christmas is still to come. Better watch out! Thanks a lot for your witty comment, my friend.
Cheers from Willy

 =  not sure
Simona Sumanaru
[10.Dec.08 02:38]
you actually want to fit into the scheme, Willy. No gain, we are but happily regressing nowadays.

 =  I wouldn't need to fit in, Simona...
John Willy Kopperud
[10.Dec.08 12:18]
...A mammoth on the other hand, eased into a scheme, would be an intriguing sight, nicht wahr? Worth a laugh. Thanks a lot for your comment.
Cheers from Willy

 =  yeah
Simona Sumanaru
[10.Dec.08 17:02]
I think he'd be one of the Great Unfit... You're most welcome, Willy!

 =  great poet
Horia Mocanu
[17.Feb.09 19:46]
you already have your place into the scheme of the great poet in the sky...not to be mistical or anything.

 =  Horia!
John Willy Kopperud
[17.Feb.09 19:55]
Heartwarming words indeed. I can but take a humble bow!
Cheers from Willy

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