| = to much? | Horia Mocanu [01.Mar.09 18:45] |
| this poem seems very round, almost spherical, yet i cannot repress my feeling that some words are extra...maybe it's just me. | |
| = too | Horia Mocanu [02.Mar.09 10:00] |
| Too much, of course... | |
| = Thank you, Horia! | Ada Ionescu [02.Mar.09 20:52] |
| Really helpful your observations, Horia! I don't even know if these could pe called "verses", but it was a vision I had - half real, half imagined - and simply wrote it down. You could help me much more if you would point out the needless part of my... lines gathering. :) Thank you! Ada | |