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 =  to much?
Horia Mocanu
[01.Mar.09 18:45]
this poem seems very round, almost spherical, yet i cannot repress my feeling that some words are extra...maybe it's just me.

 =  too
Horia Mocanu
[02.Mar.09 10:00]
Too much, of course...

 =  Thank you, Horia!
Ada Ionescu
[02.Mar.09 20:52]
Really helpful your observations, Horia! I don't even know if these could pe called "verses", but it was a vision I had - half real, half imagined - and simply wrote it down. You could help me much more if you would point out the needless part of my... lines gathering. :)
Thank you!

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