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 =  Approved, but...
John Willy Kopperud
[18.Dec.08 23:51]
...clearly not your best effort. You get too conventional.
The images are a bit worse for wear and the opening line is decidedly not engaging. The direct mention of "poem" and "poems" are often a bore. But I know you can do much better!
Cheers from Willy

 =  Willi
Ioana Geier
[19.Dec.08 00:23]
Thank you for all your help!

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