| = :) | Corina Gina Papouis [02.Jan.09 15:53] |
| Florin, I guess i am becoming a big fan of your poetry. It flows gracefully and its images leave the reader with an aftertaste. The only thing that did not sound quite as flawless to me was 'the candle in the wind' (maybe because there is a song with it, or is a cliché, I don't know...) however, the last bit: 'Your hair is sleeping on the sheet of paper, over the unfinished poem.' ..needs a frame and a wall to hang it on! Well done! Regards, Corina | |
| = . | Laurenţiu Ion [08.Jan.09 16:21] |
| this reminds me of a painting from my parents' house, especially the beginning and the end. it's strange, no ? so, I liked it! | |
| = Corina, Laurenţiu | florin caragiu [09.Jan.09 12:41] |
| thanks a lot for the commentaries. Sorry for the late answer. I'm glad zou enjoyed the little poem, thet it has left an aftertaste or touched some memories. It's fine when it hapopens so. Best regards, have a wonderful year! Florin | |