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 =  The archaic English here...
John Willy Kopperud
[07.Jan.09 20:36] a bit confusing and "off" sometimes, since it doesn't
make sense all the time. Check your spelling, please!
Cheers from Willy

 =  .
Marius Surleac
[08.Jan.09 21:39]
I think there should be "too vile" instead of "to vile"

 =  Please revise these errors:
John Willy Kopperud
[09.Jan.09 13:02]
First: wiser THAN time
Second: not all LIVE
Provided revision of these two faults, I'm sure the poem will be approved!
Cheers from Willy

 =  Thanks
Chelaru Dorin Alexandru
[10.Jan.09 14:38]
Thanks for the help:) Cheers!

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