| = The archaic English here... | John Willy Kopperud [07.Jan.09 20:36] |
| ...is a bit confusing and "off" sometimes, since it doesn't make sense all the time. Check your spelling, please! Cheers from Willy | |
| = . | Marius Surleac [08.Jan.09 21:39] |
| I think there should be "too vile" instead of "to vile" | |
| = Please revise these errors: | John Willy Kopperud [09.Jan.09 13:02] |
| First: wiser THAN time Second: not all LIVE Provided revision of these two faults, I'm sure the poem will be approved! Cheers from Willy | |
| = Thanks | Chelaru Dorin Alexandru [10.Jan.09 14:38] |
| Thanks for the help:) Cheers! | |