| = keep the secret | Corina Gina Papouis [09.Jan.09 13:13] |
| A beautiful text with its meanings concealed in an outstanding exhibition of images. I recall: ‘you switch off my words and the childhood begins’ ‘the snow is filling your eyes with a new memory and you remember what we never did’ ‘Life bleeds slowly and we know this is a sign to gather the children's toys in a corner and feel free to cry.’ ..one little nag: ‘the new born’ needs to be either ‘newly born’ or ‘newborn’.. Florin, I will keep reading you. (hope there is more to come…) Regards, Corina | |
| + time slowing | Marius Surleac [09.Jan.09 13:54] |
| Beautiful imagery you've built here Florin. I can imagine hearing this poem with your serene reading style. A frame from a man's life, so peaceful, so smooth, pure beliefs. Well done my friend! Regards, Marius | |
| = Corina, Marius | florin caragiu [10.Jan.09 00:02] |
| thank zou verz much for the remarks, zou are welcome. I've followed your nag-suggestion ;)) thanks, Corina. all the best, Florin | |
| = Love it :) | Yoanna D [10.Jan.09 14:27] |
| Florin, I just loved it, it is kind and witty, deep and hopefull, no matter the life that ends and the traps „we set in a time of despair”, you manage to heal the limit of time, the dusk of life and loneliness. I felt your poem and fell for it, it`s been such a treat:) Best wishes and a wonderful year, Ioana D. | |
| = Yoanna | florin caragiu [12.Jan.09 01:07] |
| Oh, what a surprise, Ioana, thank you very much, I feel comforted by your way to embrace the newly born poem ;)) have a wonderful year too! nice to meet you! Florin | |