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 =  Brilliant apart from two spelling errors.
John Willy Kopperud
[17.Jan.09 11:45]
A wonderful idea, which I might have rewarded if it wasn't for the fact that you write "once upone" first and lastly
"one upones". In each of these cases it must be: "once upon."
Please correct these errors!

 =  good luck in life and love
Pomana Sorin
[17.Jan.09 15:36]
Ty for that mark...

+ There...
John Willy Kopperud
[17.Jan.09 15:34] are. Congratulations on a fine poem!
Cheers from Willy

 =  please correct
Diana Todea
[18.Jan.09 20:57]
please correct: "toghether"-together. I find this poem rather ordinary, but that's my opinion. Cheers, Diana.

 =  Sorry for missing that h...
John Willy Kopperud
[19.Jan.09 00:34] has to go, of course. I still think this little poem is a charmer.
Cheers from Willy

 =  a-ha!
Dora Road
[20.Jan.09 11:23]
Sorin and his darling
sitting in a tree

I think it's a cute text.

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