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 =  patientscape
Veronica Valeanu
[12.Feb.09 22:21]
i felt like carressing the all-out, leathery smoothness of the poem...
it is simply great! It's not the poet's surgery that captivated me - but rather the "patientscape" - as if this creature were forever ailing in its inner decantation mechanism applied to his own organs...being addicted to self-inflicting surgeries...
- i would dare to suggest a little change:
[the patient moves
blue contraction
the world breathes.]

best regards,

 =  any tremor could kill the verse
Ada Ionescu
[01.Mar.09 10:01]
:). Nice!
Regards, Ada.

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