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Marius Surleac
[21.Feb.09 19:19]
A interesting and mature poem I read here, warm simplicity and colourful as well.

You can add in the subtitle that this poem is a translation of yours - just to be more visible for the readers. If you modify it, you can edit within your poem at the bottom of the page. Thank you!

Best wishes,

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Corina Gina Papouis
[22.Feb.09 23:36]
Nice work and nice to see you here as well!:)

I just wondered if you would consider either keeping all the capital letters at the beginning of each verse or getting rid of them all together, just for a tidier look!

Good luck!

 =  Gunsel Djemal
[26.Feb.09 13:03]
Thanks Corina,

I will take it into consideration as you know I am here because of you.
Thank you.

 =  Gunsel Djemal
[27.Feb.09 10:43]
Hi Marius

I have kept your advice, thank you.

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