| = roundness( trap for vicious circle)|
|the roundness of this poem!|
the desert with eroded particles of skeletons is an exterior, lifeless image, while the particles of magnets flying away is the reversed, but this time interior, throbbing vision of a destiny in a vicious circle( hell, as you said).
the last verse is a self-delusion in the exact similarity (by uttering it you give the sensation that you believe in it,whereas by thinking it you only mime believing in it).
i think the key-word is hordes(skeletons,souls,minds,ashes, magnets)- levels of existence's way of manifesting.
and pestis vetus might look like a shield for self-protection, this time, against the divine in/justice.
a poem to be remembered.
| = danke schon Veronica!|
|Veronica, you have a point here with your well delivered comment, especially the last part from your opinion - yes, this is related to the inner dualism, the flow of time and a proper way of how I see world.|
I'm very impressed with your very conclusive comment. Well done!