| = * | Laurentiu Ion [24.Jul.09 02:09] |
| this isn't a popular hollywood concept, this a veritable screenplay that captivated my emotions, got me involved. someone told me that I must learn to write a screenplay visually and leave the rest for my audience, for their comprehension. you did all these things, Veronica and I must admit that I appreciated them as well as your layouts. I also found "the heart of drama", which is the conflict. this is an inner one, something that expands like a tumour and then blow up in a billion of perceptions. I must say something about the extraordinary relation God - Space - People, but I'm afraid I will disconnect some connections, you know :) so, a well written screenplay - and honestly, I want to read more | |
| = nova | Veronica Valeanu [24.Jul.09 16:18] |
| personally my favourite character is the feminine one, whose tragical redemption i tried to build like an intense glance however paradoxically in its zoom out (because it becomes intense like a black hole/or a blotter) i'll try to put the matter in hand and thank you for lighting a star in my darkness | |