| = within | Veronica Valeanu [11.Mar.09 19:58] |
| Lynn, I just want to congratulate you for this poem. images@ ideas keep a balance, i feel like living within.the idea of the desert not only as a setting, but as a frame of mind. there's nothing I would change. i will be reading all your poems so far. | |
| = Very beautiful, mind you, for me as a desert lover, this landscape gives birth t | Sydney Krivenko [20.Mar.09 01:08] |
| Beautiful, at first these short haiki-like verses hide your depth of thought and your intense feelings. But somewhere along the line...it hit me. I can see you (or someone, anyone) wandering, stumbling? half mad with thirst and fear...again, you paint a very vivid but desperate picture. No way out? Congratulations for this one! Have you ever considered trying other forms of poetry? | |
| = Thank you | Lynn West [20.Mar.09 01:52] |
| Thank you, both very much for your kind words. In answer to your question, Sydney re: me trying other forms of poetry, I have to admit I am an amateur at writing - so for that reason alone, I guess I just write what I feel, what comes and don't worry about form... perhaps I should but - for now - its just me being me. Thank you, again. | |