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 =  It's splendid
Cãtãrãu Alina - Andreea
[13.Jan.10 23:57]
Hello, I have just read your haiku and must say that I like it very much, especially that "buzzing" that gives a nice auditive sensation. Also that metaphor - "Spring on toast" suggests the sticky and tasty work of the bees.

With respect

AC




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