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 =  congrats
dan marius
[24.Mar.09 08:54]
inspired imagery. brilliant poem. I liked it a lot. Best part "At long last you whitewashed white elephants on my kissing lips."

 =  dan
Veronica Valeanu
[24.Mar.09 10:04]
saying you like it gives me a good vibe.
nevertheless, i feel smth is missing here in the interior, that it is still unfinished, but i can't exactly put my finger on it.
thank you for your visit & indulging comment.

 =  *.
Veronica Valeanu
[24.Mar.09 10:05]
*indulgent

 =  veronica
dan marius
[24.Mar.09 10:30]
it's just perfect the way it is. do not touch it :)




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