| = nice words | Diana Todea [11.Apr.09 14:22] |
| Nice words, Lynn. puts this poem in a profound scenery, and is in tune with how the world is now. I liked your poem because your words could make nice lyrics in a song. Cheers, Diana. | |
| = new wave? | Marius Surleac [11.Apr.09 20:18] |
| Indeed a beautiful poem with a nice flow. This poem maintains the same path your poems do, but the difference is that this one wears a more mature and realistic shape. I like the imagery from the first stanza and the meaning of the next two lines from the last stanza: "When you accept that, everything else falls into place" Very good! Cheers, Marius | |
| = I appreciate you! | Lynn West [13.Apr.09 06:25] |
| Thank you both for your kind words. | |