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dan marius
[17.Apr.09 22:15]
If I were a child and had a megaphone I'd walk the streets and shout out loud these three lines. And watch everybody stop and listen :)

 =  tell 'em
Simona Sumanaru
[21.Apr.09 18:48]
of success stories, completed journeys, love and its answers, will ya?

+ beautiful!
Marius Surleac
[21.Apr.09 20:40]
I like the simplicity and the certain rhythm of your poem, especially created by the assonance very well used. A very expressive poem.

Loved it!

 =  I erpecially loved...
John Willy Kopperud
[22.Apr.09 09:41]
...the rhythm of that last line. Beautiful!
Cheers from Willy

 =  Marius and Willy
Simona Sumanaru
[22.Apr.09 09:55]
Thank you both very much! The credit goes to a friend who saw a poem in this thought of mine.

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Ada Ionescu
[29.Apr.09 22:19]
The heart as a poetry source... Very comforting this perspective... Just a little bit humble... simple and insightful.

 =  thanks, Ada
Simona Sumanaru
[30.Apr.09 14:38]
I am for simplicity, as it is genuine.

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