| = crying each word I had to condemn! | Corina Gina Papouis [29.Apr.09 12:13] |
| This poem is furious and hurt and I loved its passion. It feels overwhelming reading it and it must have been far more intense writing it. Words are almost fighting each other to come out... A poem that speaks out for itself! Regards, Corina | |
| = yes | Muresan Laura [29.Apr.09 20:12] |
| I wrote it with a lot passion combined with fury and sadness. I was sort of fighting with my own persona. Thank you for your thoughts, Corina | |
| = further | Marius Surleac [29.Apr.09 20:39] |
| Laura, I don't know what to say more - Corina pointed all out and she's right. I think this poem is a bit different than the other ones you wrote, the older ones - it has a high intensity and comes with a more mature print ... it's like finding yourself deeper than before and this is good. Well done! | |
| = yes, but | Muresan Laura [29.Apr.09 21:35] |
| mature...but do I, do we wanna be more mature after all? Thank you for expressing your opinion, Marius. | |