| = Re Walls | Corina Gina Papouis [30.Apr.09 17:26] |
| It's a good poem, Gunsel, thank you for sharing it with us. It’s written with such intensity and vividness. I was wondering if at the verse: ‘Hey! Walls Stop counting the glass anymore’ It would sound better: ‘Hey! Walls Stop counting the windows’ But then of course I have no idea what the original sound like...:) Regards, Corina | |
| = re: The Walls | Gunsel DJEMAL [01.May.09 08:47] |
| Thanks for your comment,I have made an ammendment, have a look. Actually this poem is a little bit drunk! | |