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 =  Laura
Corina Gina Papouis
[24.May.09 15:07]
A good poem! Enjoyed its fluency and simplicity. I guess no more masks after 12.00 am applies to us all.:)
I was wondering if 'at least'(third verse from the bottom) should be 'at last'...

Nice work!
Corina

 =  Corina
Laura Cherecheº
[24.May.09 19:50]
Thank you for your appreciation, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
It is a painful, ironic "at least"...

All the best,
Laura




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