| = Petre | Edilberto González Trejos [04.Aug.06 22:10] |
| The idea is awesome. Please polish it some more, Poet. It seems to me that in line 6 you should have written "too early for the soul" IN line 3 it sounds a bit better "where all os us only see darkness" In short, I loved your overall idea, please work on it and you ´ll have A GREAT WORK. With all respect and appreciation SONGO | |