| = Any Body | John Willy Kopperud [26.Aug.06 12:57] |
Congratulations! ...Ah, there you are with deep, consequent thought, fine allegories and a good composition. It isn't too long and the readers interest never wanes. It might be that you benefit greatly from dropping out of that constant rhyming. This is definitely progress! Thank you very much for sharing these lines with us. Keep on keeping on! Wipperud | |