| = a bit too... | Lorena Biculescu [31.Oct.06 16:44] |
| I think it's quite obvious that everything is cold in the world you created...and most of all I liked the second lyric "Cold is the sun i wake up with" but...you know...you used a lot of "cold" in this poem and even though you might have felt that way to put it so many times in it, it becomes annoying to the reader... | |
| = Thanks | Andrei [01.Nov.06 02:29] |
| Lorena Thank you for reading my poems fisrt of all. I know that i have lost to learn and after, work on my poetry. You're right on the 'cold" thing, i can see it now, after i read it a cuple of time. Thanks again ofr visiting | |