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 =  blinding the fight
felix nicolau
[23.Nov.06 22:21]
expressive, highlighting the the future tension between hunter and prey, like an author prowling around the text

 =  twisted view
Marius Surleac
[17.Jun.09 16:34]
As Felix pointed out, indeed this poem is an expressive one and the assonance helps its rhythm when read. Visual as well.

Nice.

Cheers!




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