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 =  far-fetched excellence
felix nicolau
[25.Dec.06 16:53]
wordly abstinence doubled by profound meaning, without the slightest ostentation

 =  short and sharp, short and very deep, that´s your style, I like it. Sydney
Sydney Krivenko
[29.Dec.06 15:51]
short and sharp, that is your style, only at the end it becomes clear what you´re getting at... very deep, I like it! Sydney

 =  You knew how to measure
John Willy Kopperud
[02.Jan.07 21:23]

=Darker

Thanks a lot to both of you, Felix and Sydney. This is the first time anyone has labelled my writing "deep". The cause might be that I get in touch with a sinister side of reality and fiction by the end of the poem.

I'm looking forward to reading contributions from both of you!




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